Is this how I post to assignment one?

Hello, I'm Nicolas S. Pearson, a reader of comic books and casual player of videogames, and this is actually the second time I've tried to make a blog with the first one ending with me rather discouraged; such makes one realize that the internets is a cruel place. But, its also has great websites including YouTube - Broadcast Yourself.. Currently, youtube is allowing me to listen to the Bee Gees. I've spent most of the day listening to music on youtube in retrospect, but tomorrow I'll probably spend more time reading comics. I love reading comics; they’re filled art and clever drama that can’t be easily depicted in a book, and action that belongs in a cartoon or a high budget movie. If I had the opportunity I’d definitely want to spend my life writing the plots for comics. Other future careers I would consider would be in video games or engineering; basically I’d prefer a job where I can produce a recognizable and memorable product.